I liked it until you said it was about pirates. After reading the plot I was less than enthusiastic. It's a good plot, but I was prepped for something in a completely different direction. I don't see how the protagonist is suffering from lack of freedom, it sounds more like he's just going on an adventure at sea and that there are bad guys waiting for him back on land. So, although you're story sounds good, it just wasn't what I was anticipating.
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